Summary:

The critique went better than expected and I had little changes to make, and I got very good feedback from my peers.

https://miro.com/app/board/uXjVLYhwozs=/

It was informative to see everyone else’s idea and leave comments on other people’s work, to give them advice on what to improve.

Changes:

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My lecturer mentioned to remove the first screen, as it’s not needed on a smartwatch. Also, to change the logo from a water drop to a bubble to resemble oxygen. To change breath to breathe, and adjust the colours.

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• No first screen
• Colours- light blue with white (gradient)
• Change logo to bubble reflect oxygen
• Breathe not breath

Reworking:

I only had to make slight changes to my initial screens. I adjusted my brand colours to darker blue for the background, and light blue for buttons. I redesigned my logo to a circle, so it looks more like oxygen rather than a water droplet.

I agree that the changes I made make a difference in the appearance and the contrast of the colours make it easier to see the buttons stand out from the background when it’s darker.

• Also, I checked using a colour contrast checker for the white writing against the light blue box and it failed. So, I used the background colour instead and it passed.
• I think that the appearance of the interface looks more appealing and easier to view now.