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I got some valuable feedback from my lecturer:
I agree with all the above, and I will make sure to make these changes.
Feedback I received from my peers
One piece of advice, that I completely agree with, changing the map and colours. I feel like I didn’t spend enough time on this before the critique, so I need to make a more simplistic map and pick a colour palette that more visually appealing.