Miro board for project 1 & 2
https://www.figma.com/file/DT3vHbgpvJJjSLtDd1MLlq/Project-1%3A-Point%2C-Line-%26-Plane?type=design&node-id=0%3A1&mode=design&t=0nuUOkwOVfusGVSj-1
My lecturer liked how their was inspiration behind each one, helped to visualise the pattern of each frame. Especially, how each plane is a different landmark, showing an aerial view of a map with their surrounding. The one piece of advice, I got from my peers was to vary the consistencies of the lines in frequencies, to make it less balanced.
I’m satisfied with the feedback given, and will take on the advice onboard. I am going to refine my Frequency Lines, to make them look varied in sizes in each frame, but still follow the pattern from quiet to loud. I want to keep the rounded lines and the same width of each line to keep consistency within each frame.
My lecturer liked the first one the best. He liked the style of the diagonal lines. Also, he said the blue and yellow contrasts well against the grey background. He suggested to make the text and the “UDHR” logo, diagonal to match the “Rest & Leisure” and the “24”. One of my peers mentioned, making the number line up the logo in the second one.
I was happy with the comments I received, I will take the suggestion into consideration. I am going to pick the first one as my final design, as I was unsure which one to pick before. I am going to make the text line up diagonally beside the bottom left blue plane, and the logo with the top right plane. It will help to enhance the design style I was trying to go for.